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The World According to Katie-1 by ~Kswizzle:iconKswizzle:



If everything in this world were up to me, the grass would be blue and the sky would be green.Trees would be purple and yellow and red.We'd sleep on the floor and walk on the bed.Instead of falling down you would fall up,we'd drink from a plate and eat from a cup. We'd cry when we're happy and laugh when we're sad.Bad would mean good and good would mean bad. When you meet someone you'd say goodbye and when you leave you would say hi.Fish would fly and birds would swim, students would teach and teachers would learn. Snow would be hot and fire would be cold.We wouldn't have to so what we're told. Oh what a fun place it would be....if everything in this world were up to me.....
©2007-2009 ~Kswizzle
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Author's Comments

Okay so I'm not Dr.Suess but hey whatdya expect from a seventh grader. Besides...I think i did *okay on the rhyming...well till the end. I started it from this thing we did in english class called quickwrites so yea.... please don't steal it my words.... Not that you would cus its not that great but yea.... its just part one so more are to come of The World According to Katie

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:iconkthept:
Wasn't this a quickwrite?Yeah, This is my favorite one so far =]

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Would things have changed if I could've stayed?
Would you have loved me either way?
Dressed to the blues, day to day, with my collar up.
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I liked this Qucikwrite! :D From Joe I was expecting something like "If it were all up to me, I'd be with the little green elves across the sea....." lol :D

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Sometimes, you just have to dance like a madman in the Self Help section of your local bookstore.
:iconkswizzle:
yea i kno me too

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Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds...

~If I had nothing but you, I would still have everything.~ <3
:iconkswizzle:
yea i kno me too

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Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds...

~If I had nothing but you, I would still have everything.~ <3
:icon2sexy4myshirt666:
hey I loved the quickwrite.I made the world evil in mine.Don't ask.tehehehe

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I'm not shy...I'm just quietly examining my prey.*evil grin*
:iconpoison-ivy13:
I liked this one too. But I also like the ones about sadness that I can make really depressing and bum my whole class out.

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You are my sweetest downfall.

I loved you first.
:iconkswizzle:
lol.i kno.but then sometimes i hate it when they come up and ask....r u okay? it bugs me cus i'm fine.....

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Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds...

~If I had nothing but you, I would still have everything.~ <3
:iconpoison-ivy13:
yeah, especially if youre not fine, and you don't wanna talk about it.

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You are my sweetest downfall.

I loved you first.

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